Comments : Fiery Summer (Nonet, Cinquain and Rictameter)

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent work on all the forms and the poem. Love and nature combined, cannot beat that. Summer is my second favorite season. You have done it justice. Well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This is really beautiful Meena!
    Although you have used three different formats, it reads as one story....

    They could also be posted seperately and this one I found most beautiful:

    Scent of
    burnt earth allures
    his lady to join him,
    charming her with his serenade

    Splendid job!


    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Timothy r

    To be able to create a poem using 3 different forms is indeed very intimidating, but you put it altogether so beautifully. The first paragraph my favorite, great writng indeed. Timothy r

  • 9 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is breathtaking, Meena! Three seperate forms laced together perfectly, very beautiful. I adore your nature pieces and your imagination behind them. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful write.. Loved how you have crafted each form... Flowing smoothly..
    Lovely imagery...

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Meena....Your talent is shining :) Beautiful poem :)
    Take Care

  • 9 years ago

    by anand singh

    It takes great tallent to combine 3 forms of writing into something this beautiful, and you have shown that tallent my friend.
    Always a plaesure to read and enjoy your beautiful poems.
    Keep up the great work.