Such a joyful write. You can almost hear the songbird singing and see it on the window sill. Well done.

Lovely lovely write...
I could heard the songbird singing in your beautiful words... the longingess to heard to sing... its sweet melody reverberates in your write...

lovely imagery and beautiful word choice ... nicely penned...
somewhere I felt sad... for the way nature is being destroyed... dnt know till when the song bird will sing near our homes...

Awh, what a cute little piece. Your repetition was great in this poem. Short write but beautifully done. Good job - again!

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That was very beautiful, made me smile. It really reminds me of springtime, when everything dead comes alive again, including our souls! You are an amazing artist. Keep writting, 5/5.

-mandy :)

Hello Ingrid,

this is lovely tribute to a friend. To be likened to a song-bird, a "troubadour" is a tribute indeed. It is nice to see a poem assist by our friend Kiko - I think he has logged on recently, so hopefully he'll be sharing his wisdom with us once more.

A very enjoyable and accomplished piece. ((hugs)) xx