Comments : Next Day's First Breath.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben

    Hey, long time no talk, i wish i could speak thisn well, its awesomeee, and you leave me behind. i hope everything is awesomee, please keep in touchhh, i miss you Sarah. Laters,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Ixora

    Simply gorgeous! I love this poem it is deep and seems real not hopeful. I think that is its main appeal to me. The structure is well created and the poem simply flows as I assume your love for one another does; it is not forced. Best of luck to you both!