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  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    David:)

    It has been so long since you last posted a poem.
    Such a sad poem you have crafted....It's beautiful, like only you can make it...but I do not want to read this kind of stuff by you:/
    I want the sun to shine for you always, my beautiful, sweet, wonderful, gifted friend.
    I hope that, if this poem is real, she will soon return to you, sweetheart.
    It was such a pleasure to read your words on here again..two years have passed now since we first met and became friends..my first friend in the virtual world:)

    God bless you David, for always caring:)

    * hugs and kisses*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    "Heartache and misery, are my new middle names
    Tears my newest neighbors
    Pain my only friend
    I hate it! I loathe it!
    I will be dying in the end. ."

    My favourite part of the poem.. Very well written and constructed. The emotion is great.

  • 8 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Denial
    Heartache
    Misery
    Suicide
    Peace.."

    So simple, yet big on power and flow. It's been a while since I have read your stuff and you get better and better. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by CrazyNlove

    I love this i forgot how good u were. lol i love your poems.