Comments : Jailbird

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You did a really good job with. Kept me smiling and laughing for a long time. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay.....this is so funny

    What could have happened to land my butt here
    I searched for some clues to make it all clear
    The clothes that I wore wreaked of cologne
    My breast was itching, the reason unknown

    The imagery is fantastic........LOL The story is wonderful....keeps the reader laughing the entire time :)

    I searched for the cause in my lacy black bra
    Pulled out some hundreds and stood there in awe
    How did this get there?, I am normally broke!
    This can't be for real, this must be a joke!

    Just picturig you standing in that cell with that was was enough to make me lose it.....ROFLMAO.....hahahhahahaa

    Excellent job on this challenge!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Totally unreal!! HAHA. Just amazing to read and so funny Kay. You did FANTASTIC on the challenge! Just brilliant.

    LOL,
    Olwin.
    Im still smiling!..haha, lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is one of the funniest poem i have ever read. Your imagination is simply WILD, which just adds another feather on your idol personality.
    Awesome theme and just amazing choice of words.

    Loved it.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    Like a good page turner I wanted to get to the end to see what your 'crime' was. That was one heck of a night you had there, but of course it's fictional : )

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    Brings back some memories of when I was not walking with the Lord.Had some of those days myself..lol..anyways, you did a wonderful job with this piece.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Your poem may have been fictional but in my life time I have been in a few scrapes with Mr Law through abuse of firewater and you have grapicall hit the nail on the head with your words.
    A poem full of smiles and irony love the end too a 5/5 RayS

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Good one. Let us hope we never have that happen to us.

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    Kay, this was hilarious, ok, I'm coming to Georgia to hang out with you LOL

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem was really good. And really fictional lol i really liked it. It keeps u drawn in.

  • 14 years ago

    by cici89

    Thats Awesome. It all goes togethr great 5/5