Comments : Tug of War

  • 9 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    What a lovely and unique poem! I absolutely enjoyed reading this.
    "how it carries caution
    with all the immobility of fear
    and tastes more like a sugary blend of
    it daunts me,
    this new venom that swims about these veins
    like spry fish
    pumping complexities to my heart,
    I'd rather just adore you"

    This part of the end just took me away, your language bring the reader in. Wonderful work. 5/5

  • 8 years ago


    I honestly don't know what to say about this poem. I love it, but can't find the words...