Special Secret

by Lady Nik   Jul 10, 2009


I wake up in this skin of mine
and I'm deeply saddened.
I prayed I wouldn't be me
but God doesn't listen to mistakes.
I'm sick of split end hair
and boring brown eyes.
You sparkle like distant stars
I burn out like tired candles.

You're so very special...

I see you everyday
and I can barely stand it.
You're such a blessed soul
while mine is just empty.
You smile and people warm up
I walk in and whispers start
I'm ugly with simple thoughts
You're perfect...end of discussion.

I wish I was special...

I didn't mean to hurt you
I just needed to be you.
So I let envy paint me green
as red painted your body.
Now I'm stuck here
feeling your skin over mine.
I smile to myself knowing
no one will know this secret.

I just wanted to be special...

*For a club contest where I had to use the lyric " You're so very special, I wish I was special".*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobody

    This poem is so creepy but i can relate to it... my favorite kind of poems are those that linger in my mind. it was a mouthwatering poem that left me thirsty for more keep it up! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Exostosis

    "So I let envy paint me green"

    this is some line that garnishes the poem or lets says is the touch to the poem....i love this line very much....

    eh, you are special ...dont you doubt it silly...^^,

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Envy is so harsh but I think we all do it.

    A well phrased poem , touched with sadness and guilt.
    A very enjoyable read

  • 14 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I really like the opening line it brings me in and it reminds me of what we all feel about ourselves

    "I wake up in this skin of mine
    and I'm deeply saddened."

    the line is so grasping the whole poem was great job 5/5!!!!!!!!!

    **plz comment bak**

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    "I wake up in this skin of mine
    and I'm deeply saddened."

    I really like the opening line, I think many of us have felt this kind of sadness, unhappy with who we are and what we see.

    The ending stanza was my favorite part, it is so dark and eerie, it really made me cringe but stop and think as well.

    You have done a nice job here, it was an enjoyable read.

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