Comments : Playing Pretend

  • 9 years ago

    by deadly sun

    Actually a tear in my eye from reading this.
    You really have a way with words and great rhythm. its such a shame people have to go through these kinds of things but you have taken it and turned it into a beautiful poem.

    Seriously amazing job never stop writting.

  • 9 years ago

    by Stuart

    I like good job

  • 9 years ago

    by Mercedes

    Yu Have A Strong Way Of Putting Words Together On A Paper Nd Letting Them Flow Like Water From A Flood.. iiT Comes Out So Fluently, Bring Tears To One's Eyes.