Gosh, unbelievable dictation of exactly how i feel, and how my friends feel, to be leaving school right now. and written so well! i love the 'play with the past' and 'stuggling to make time last', they are the most relatable and well written lines i think. x
Brilliant! It was absolutely brilliant and I loved every line! As soon as I'd read the fisr stanza I knew it was going to be a great poem. It was so well written. The words you used, the effortless flow. It's instantly a favourite. The message is so clear and genuine, and it's so relateable. A great, great poem. Loved it. Honestly. I'm saving it to my favourites right now. How did this not win?
P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.
2 years ago
I remember when I left school like if was yesterday. Times have changed alot. I have 1/2 of those school friends left. Most of us have families now.