Quests poesia e scritto bene. Puoi agguingere più ad esso se. E come se si ferma nel bel mezzo di una emozione. Più di tutti e grande se. Eccellente
5/5

Corinne,
You know I absolutely adore your writes and I think this is a marvelous write. Usually your writes are very lighthearted and naturesque, this was a different kind of write for you and I found that unique on it's own. You definitely have a knack for being able to write anything, and this proves it. The fact that you put it in Itallian also was an eyecatcher. I think you have done a marvelous job on this.
Great Write..
Take Care,
Kay