Comments : At The Edge Of The World

  • 8 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow, I truly love the line "Solitude's feminine caress chills me to the bone." It's very descriptive and I love when inanimate things are personified. Really beautiful. The only advice I have is to focus your thoughts more...make it more directed to one subject. Other than that, awesome. Still giving you a 5/5 :)
    ~Peace, Jules