Comments : Broken heart ( MUST READ )

  • 8 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I like the beginning of this poem but towards the end It became a little choppy. But I do understand what this feels like. Trying to drink all your pain away but once you wake up and realise that even with beer after beer the pain of her leaving you will always be the same. My dad got cheated on 2 times and both times he took her back but finally the 3rd time was a charm kicked her out and moved on. Love is a bissful thing.But at the same time its full of lies and furry. I don't know how it feels to get cheated on but I do know how it feels to lose the one you love and that is one hard thing to get over. But I do like the meaning of the poem.
    Take care,

  • 5 years ago

    by Tina

    Perfect !!!!