I'm starting to think your amazing, your use of language is fantastic, and the flow is beautiful, i reread it at least four times, esspecialy the first two stanzas.

and i LOVE these lines.

I'm envious of your writing. beautiful. 5/5
=)

When life has always moved so fast,
it's weird to try and make it last
by taking out what makes it gone,
though to this corruption I am drawn.

its so true, and so beautiful how you phrased it