Comments : Broken angel

  • 8 years ago

    by Fran

    Sad, tender and brimming with love. Beautiful!

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very thoughtful write. I am glad you have that angel beside you. The one who no matter you can count on. I like your writing. Very well done, kel.

  • 8 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Okay, about a couple years ago, i had a gf and she called me a scar angel, for i was suicidle. and she knew i was pissed at life. so she would say that she preyed that her angel would fly again. my soul u have just inspired me to write a poem. ty

  • 8 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the way you listed all the negative things about the "angel" and let everybody know exactly what he wasn't, but then let it be known that you loved it regardless because it was yours and noone elses. Great job 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Ken

    From reading it makes me think of my girlfriend. when I look at her I can honestly say that she is a scar angel with all the things she goes through she still comes to me smiles hugs kisses and all. your poems so far are touching my heart ina very good way keep up the work.

  • 8 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This is excellent .. I think of you looking at a child with cerebral palsy or cystic fibrosis ; something they`re born with . It really appeals to anyone who's ever known any one with one of those illnesses . I like how you seperated it into two lines , it's really effective .

  • 7 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Well thank you all for your comments and to shadowmaker umm very imaginative and odd mind you have and yet i think your someone id get along with but he wasnt a disabled child or a PETA chicken he was an ex who was in a car crash and broke the majority of his body

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow. This is amazing, wonderful job. That's really all I can say though, sorry.