What a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery and word choices are awesome. You painted such a beautiful picture for the readers mind.....I truely enjoyed this read.
8 years ago
Very good poem, love how you use a very simple yet complex poetic style, so that it wouldn't be to hard for the readers to understand.
Now I could swear I commented on this .. but now I see I didnt and feel terrible about it. Congrats first of all on the win, very very much deserved!! (: Awesome write, really unique poem with original descriptions..made it extremely difficult for me to pick my favorite line.