Meena, you write with such passion. You captured the essences of Autumn with your words. Well done.

Oh how I adore autumn and all its splendor it has to offer. Very nice nature poem you have created here. Keep up the nice work.

Take Care,
Kay

A beautiful analogy of life with seasons... and the dawn of youth with autumn... lovely imagery...

Autumn gypsy in all her glory
twirls her colorful skirt
with a dance of lively chill
she enthralls earth from above

^^ loved these verses... specially the colorful skirt one :) cute imagery :)

Yes she dose.

I thought you used this nature piece to capture us as people wonderfully. You had some nice description.

"Autumn gypsy in all her glory
twirls her colorful skirt
with a dance of lively chill
she enthralls earth from above "

I really like this closing stanza, I am an admirer of fall myself and the skirt analogy put a wonderful picture in my head.

Good job.

Very nice, Meena and also very unique to call Autumn a gypsy....clever lady:)

Well done and God bless:)

5/5 Ingrid

Beautiful. The style of expression and the language you've used is absolutely fantastic! Very good write!

A TRULY LOVELY WRITTEN POEM THAT CAPTURES AUTUMN FROM ITS BEGINNING AND PAINTS PICTURES OF ALL ITS GLORIES. LOVE THE GYPSY DANCING AS THE WIND BLOWS COLOURFUL AND REFRESHING. RAY S 5/5

Beautiful poem! I can see that the Autumn Gypsy is eternally young!

Meena
What a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery and word choices are awesome. You painted such a beautiful picture for the readers mind.....I truely enjoyed this read.
Excellent jjob!
~Bravo~
Love Cindy

Very good poem, love how you use a very simple yet complex poetic style, so that it wouldn't be to hard for the readers to understand.

Congratulations on the win.
A very deserving win at that.

Take Care,
Kay

Wtg, Meena;)

Well deserved, dear lady.

God bless:)

Ingrid

Congrats Meena !
Love Cindy

Now I could swear I commented on this .. but now I see I didnt and feel terrible about it. Congrats first of all on the win, very very much deserved!! (: Awesome write, really unique poem with original descriptions..made it extremely difficult for me to pick my favorite line.
Great work!!

Vivid imagery and excellent use of a metaphor! Congratualtions on the well deserved win!