Comments : Autumn Gypsy

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Meena, you write with such passion. You captured the essences of Autumn with your words. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Oh how I adore autumn and all its splendor it has to offer. Very nice nature poem you have created here. Keep up the nice work.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 8 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    A beautiful analogy of life with seasons... and the dawn of youth with autumn... lovely imagery...

    Autumn gypsy in all her glory
    twirls her colorful skirt
    with a dance of lively chill
    she enthralls earth from above

    ^^ loved these verses... specially the colorful skirt one :) cute imagery :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Yes she dose.

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought you used this nature piece to capture us as people wonderfully. You had some nice description.

    "Autumn gypsy in all her glory
    twirls her colorful skirt
    with a dance of lively chill
    she enthralls earth from above "

    I really like this closing stanza, I am an admirer of fall myself and the skirt analogy put a wonderful picture in my head.

    Good job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Very nice, Meena and also very unique to call Autumn a gypsy....clever lady:)

    Well done and God bless:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Sourav

    Beautiful. The style of expression and the language you've used is absolutely fantastic! Very good write!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    A TRULY LOVELY WRITTEN POEM THAT CAPTURES AUTUMN FROM ITS BEGINNING AND PAINTS PICTURES OF ALL ITS GLORIES. LOVE THE GYPSY DANCING AS THE WIND BLOWS COLOURFUL AND REFRESHING. RAY S 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Beautiful poem! I can see that the Autumn Gypsy is eternally young!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    What a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery and word choices are awesome. You painted such a beautiful picture for the readers mind.....I truely enjoyed this read.
    Excellent jjob!
    ~Bravo~
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Andrew

    Very good poem, love how you use a very simple yet complex poetic style, so that it wouldn't be to hard for the readers to understand.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Congratulations on the win.
    A very deserving win at that.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wtg, Meena;)

    Well deserved, dear lady.

    God bless:)

    Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Meena !
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Now I could swear I commented on this .. but now I see I didnt and feel terrible about it. Congrats first of all on the win, very very much deserved!! (: Awesome write, really unique poem with original descriptions..made it extremely difficult for me to pick my favorite line.
    Great work!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Vivid imagery and excellent use of a metaphor! Congratualtions on the well deserved win!