Comments : Notice [lyric]

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow.... this poem is sooo touching! I love it... I realllly liked the repetition and how at the end you admit that it's yourself.. It's beautiful! I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.. I know I can... sometimes I feel like I want to be noticed when I'm sad or upset! Great job with this!