Comments : False Hopes

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    So much painful, powerful and emotional words. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    We are truly never alone, although it may feel like it. This was a truly wonderful write, I felt your pain and emotion as I read your poem. I hope life gets better for you, it's sad how at times we all think this way and how hope is not in the equation. We see the negatives of life, and fail to see the positive. But in time, we become more optimistic and realize we are not alone, and this pain is lifted. I hope that this is just a poem and not true, but if it is I wish you all the best. I hope everything gets better. Welcome to the site, btw. Really a pleasure to read your work. (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    :( aww such sad poetry hun. I want some more love poems from you. You write with sure intensity and emotions. I love it. I feel like you really put your feelings out there and that's what makes a poem good. Keep writing sweetie. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    This is one of the best poems i have read in ages. Good job :)