Lonley Flower

by BraidhairCutie   Oct 21, 2009


Like a Lonley Flower in the meadow,

the only flower surrounded by weeds,
their thorns make her bleed.

they mislead her everyday,
they disgrace her everyway.

She blooms all alone,
to this day she's still unknown.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I think you have the beginning of a good poem here, you flow and wording is off a bit, but I loved the ending and the start of the imagery here. With a little work I think this could definitely be a great piece of work.

  • 14 years ago

    by chewang

    Hey ,thnxx for the comment..i likedyour poems too...

  • 14 years ago

    by chewang

    Hey ,thnxx for the comment..i likedyour poems too...

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