Comments : God's Beauty

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A very nice nature poem praising the Creator of all things beautiful in nature. Well written and a joy to read. Nice job for a first post.

  • 14 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A beautiful first poem, Mari! Bravo!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful... such an inspiring and motivating write... praising the beauty that we always overlook...

    We are not worthy of all You touch.
    We have not purity of words and such.

    ^^ it is indeed sad we are no longer worthy of the riches bestowed upon us... neither we respect or take care of the riches that nature has provided us with...

    So let the world speak of all You are.
    You shine out Your glory in every star.

    ^^ beautifully penned... loved these lines so much :)

    And in small, oh, or just in everything,
    Oh loving God, may we praise and sing!

    ^^ reminds me of my childhood... the singing and praying... I used to notice everything around me...

    yours words motivate us to look inside ourselves and feel the vaccum that we have created in us....

    wonderful write... keep writing :)