'Midnight lights and blueberry skies
match the smile on your face
and the twinkle in your eyes.
Forever we sit there, thinking out loud;
between the neon stars
and the golden clouds.'
This is such an amazing stanza, oh wow. Beautifully written. I loved the imagery this has produced. Flowing is off the chart amazing.
Stanza two, last line is so true. A father's pride is an amazing thing to have. Beautifully worded.
You are talented, thank you for sharing. I loved the way you mentioned of the Father's hands, it's just so captivating. So pure.
-Waking Freedom 5/5