Comments : Wish Come True

  • 8 years ago

    by Deana

    This is really beautiful Jenn, I love the style in which it is written. simplistic and yet complex...very well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Impressive...these short liner really worked for you..the poem has such a soft touch to it and filled with love and devotion the the significant other.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    *for the significant other

  • 8 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Wow, this seems like something I would have wrote along time ago. The emotion here is just beautiful, and kinda makes me long to feel again. Wonderfully written.. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Really, really beautiful. Straight to the point but very intriuging (or however u spell it lol). None the less - flawless piece, 5/5. Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 8 years ago

    by Kaetaj

    Wow...that was absolutely beautiful!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats Jenn....a very beautiful piece.
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... beautiful poem! Great job and congratulations!!! =D

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations on your win dear :)

    Beautifully written indeed, gave me goosebumps :)

    Awesome write and congrats once again

    all the best and take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Donna

    Very fluent easy but pashionate eading ..Really enjoyed this xxClose words to my own heart