I liked this poem alot. Like the other girl was saying, some people would not like the repetitive words throughout the whole poem. But I, on the other hand, thought it added a little something to the piece and I thought it was charming. Again, on this poem, you did a great job expressing how you feel and explaining the true enjoyment of love :)
You are the one, My one and only,
The one who makes me feel alive,
The one that I need to be with forever.
^Very nice ending. It was a good way to close off your story :)
Very nice piece, once again. I highly enjoyed the detail and the love wordings. Don't stop writing!