My One And Only

It pains me to say it, but i think that your writing style is just bland. I dont really like it. The reptition throughout it just drug on and took away from the poem. So i give this a 3/5

I liked this poem alot. Like the other girl was saying, some people would not like the repetitive words throughout the whole poem. But I, on the other hand, thought it added a little something to the piece and I thought it was charming. Again, on this poem, you did a great job expressing how you feel and explaining the true enjoyment of love :)

You are the one, My one and only,
The one who makes me feel alive,
The one that I need to be with forever.

^Very nice ending. It was a good way to close off your story :)

Very nice piece, once again. I highly enjoyed the detail and the love wordings. Don't stop writing!

5/5

This is so beautiful, passionate & romantic. You express lots of feeling & emotion & show how you truly feel about your love & how precious it means to you.

This romantic poem has flowed so freely from you heart it is beautiful

This poem was actually sweet, it meant so much, not just to me, but everyone, very good job, 5/5

and i returned the favor lol
thanks anyways