Comments : Sibyllene

  • 8 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I read this the other day and meant to comment and vote on it because it was excellent. End stanza makes it amazing great work 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Oh my goodness, this is absolutely beautiful. Well written, touching. My favorite stanza

    "Though strong men have fallen in her path with desire
    She knows He shall burn the great Strength of Men by Fire
    As she looks into her mirror nothing but beauty gazes back
    Peace and justice reign where no shadow makes heaven black ". This is absolutely well written and of course it inspired me to write. I admire your work. No wonder why you are among my favorites few poets. Well done 5/5, kel.

  • 8 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Wow. i liked it. a definate 5/5 haha.
    very well written.

    *Val

  • 8 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Woah!...and WoW!!

    I have long loved her vision, too....
    good for you!

  • 8 years ago

    by Chelsey

    One word or this poem...Incredible...absolutely beautifully penned!! I loved it!

    Her charm is soothing but her love speaks louder
    She likes the smells of mint and gunpowder

    ^^ This was just awesome...My favorite part :) I loved that rhyme!
    I enjoyed reading this!
    Chelsey