Comments : Ode

  • 8 years ago

    by Ash

    You are right! I truly love this poem but it has so much of pain written all over that it's hard not to shed a tear while reading it.
    I do really hope that there is no truth behind these words for if a love like that does exists it can only break a person.

    None the less getting back to your poem... It was a brilliant write as always. The emotions were well conveyed and it brought upon a sense of true pain that touched my heart. The images were vividly created and the poem flowed so well... It is a flawless masterpiece! 5/5 from me!