Comments : For You Mom

  • 14 years ago

    by Vox

    So I just wanted to let you know, mom,
    The way that I feel.
    And that my love for you,
    Has and will always be real.

    this is without a doubt my favorite part of the poem. the subtle change in the rhythym made this part stand out just enough to make itself known.

    The poem on its own is also an impressively good representation of how you feel about your mother, good job

    5/5