Fragments of Dust, Nothing More

Hello Poet Jane...this is such a very wonderful poem. You can really make us think and feel. 5/5. Keep up the very good job!

Really veyy beautiful.
Konstantin.

Jane,
I am quite impressed by this piece, and i'd like to say well done of winning the challenge. This was a deserving piece and I definitly enjoyed it from start to finish..

My favorite part:

"No,
old age, do not dare!
treason to my fading
heart, you would steal his
illustrious scent from me.
no,
grief waits at the door of such loss..."

The tone throughout this poem was of such elegance and i'm fond of the way you wrote this acrostic. A lovely love poem which held ache yet was penned beautifully. Well done.

-Mel

Amazing :) gotta admit I had to read it over and over again.
Very well done on this..acrostic is such a cool form indeed. well chosen and well penned.

Write on~

Congrats on the win Jane.

I really enjoyed reading this piece by you.

Deluded, I fall,
under blankets of memory
still cradling, though
time - time, the unforgiving.
^^^
My favorite part !!!! Love the insertion of time-time ... the pause between words really makes the reader stop - and think.

Very touching piece indeed!