Comments : Poem About Fresh Graduate

  • 8 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think we all should be proud of what we accomplish and strive to do even better. I thought the rhyming was awesome but the last stanza doesn't rhyme and I'm not sure why. Excellent job none the less and worthy of a 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I agree with Karl. But rather then say should i would say we need to proud of what we accomplish but not to the extent where we become cocky but just proud enough to show people you believe in yourself. I don't but other people should do it :)
    5/5