Wow Michelle. That was a great poem. You sure put your thoughts and emotions into this wonderful piece. I liked your choice of words as well as the flow. You're doing great. Keep up the wonderful work and I hope to hear from you soon.
Kristina

Again...great i don't know what else to tell you..hope to hear from you soon..=)

A nice Emotional poem... Good work

Hi Michelle,

I'm relatively new on this site and it's great to read poems which show such inspiration of the emotions people feel. Truly a good poem.

Take care,
Wez