Awww... this is such a sweet and creative poem! I love how you've written within the holiday time period! Merry Christmas btw! I looove this poem.. it's so original! And I love how when you were younger you were misspelling and then as you got older you started spelling well! That's really cool. Asking for the girl's heart was really sweet as well, hope Santa give it to you! Great job! :)
I understood you were trying to write like a little kid with all the spelling mistakes and things of that sort. I just didn't understand the beginning of the second stanza where you spelled dear as "deer" when the kid spelled it right when he was 3 but wrong when he was 6? The poem should've started that way in my opinion. Its still a very emotional piece and isn't all that bad. I gave this an honest 4/5
Well the reason why he spelled it right at 3 is because the 3 year old couldn't write yet so he had his mom helping him and of course she can spell. Then at 6 years old he is able to write his first letter to Santa. So that is why it is spell write on the first stanza.
6 years ago
Good job Cale. It evokes nostalgia in some of us. In nostalgia is a degree of truth and you pinned it. I hope Santa granted you the girl's heart. I hope you start believeing in him again.