Comments : Not So Happy Ending

  • 8 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I'm choking on a new sorrow that I've never tasted.
    I'm wrestling with all our moments that are now wasted

    ^^ Loved those two lines. Good personification! Im really glad you repeated those lines in another stanza too, it reallly added so good effect to the poem.

    This was a really good write! I like your descriptions! Im glad I read!

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... this is so sad but so deep and I love the way you expressed yourself... you've written about some deep emotions that I can relate to.. Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Amazing write...beautifully expressed 5/5