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I'm choking on a new sorrow that I've never tasted.
I'm wrestling with all our moments that are now wasted
^^ Loved those two lines. Good personification! Im really glad you repeated those lines in another stanza too, it reallly added so good effect to the poem.
This was a really good write! I like your descriptions! Im glad I read!
Aww... this is so sad but so deep and I love the way you expressed yourself... you've written about some deep emotions that I can relate to.. Great job!
Amazing write...beautifully expressed 5/5