Comments : On a day like today

  • 7 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I like the fervent belief of how the day will turn out all good for you as illustrated in this poem.
    I especially loved this part:
    and at the end of the
    day the dawn will take
    away my pain
    ^ ^ ^
    Dawn will take away my pain... it paints a pretty picture in my mind (: 5/5!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, this is perfect and inspirational. Alot more people should think like this but I admit it can't be easy. 5/5, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Siham

    It's really one of the best peoms i've ever read . I like where u take me after i imagine every single word . I totaly agree with emma , it's not easy at all for everyone to think in this way , i congratulate u .
    wonderful job 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Francine

    Amazing! and it made me happy that you had such a day and I hope many more.

  • 7 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    I really like this poem, I'm not sure but it gives me hope, when I wake up and see the bright days of my life, even though others are dark. Thanks for that. :)

    welldone, nice writing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mollie

    What a day