I like the fervent belief of how the day will turn out all good for you as illustrated in this poem.
I especially loved this part:
and at the end of the
day the dawn will take
away my pain
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Dawn will take away my pain... it paints a pretty picture in my mind (: 5/5!
It's really one of the best peoms i've ever read . I like where u take me after i imagine every single word . I totaly agree with emma , it's not easy at all for everyone to think in this way , i congratulate u .
wonderful job 5/5