Comments : New Year

  • 7 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Sourav, a brave honest write about the glitter and tinsel that the world will hold out to us sometimes ...I feel bursting like an empty bubble. I share your sentiments as I know what you mean. All is not what glitters. Very well written and expressed. Well done :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    I'm so glad to see you have posted another poem. I have missed reading your verses. Like the old saying goes "All that glitters is not gold" There are always people who put on a mask of falsehood and happiness that really doesn't exsist. Maybe that is the only way they can face the world. Very deep and intense piece you have penend.
    Excellet job!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'Firecrackers burned and died; earth grasps for air'
    ^ did you mean to say earth gasps for air?

    Other than that minor thing, awesome awesome write. Havent read such a interesting poem in so long. Cant really add to what has been said, but very very well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Daniel Rodriguez

    Nice poem. Can relate.