Comments : The Jungle (Lira)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Your last line may be off by one syllable-other than that beautiful nature poem-could be about a tropical forest or a jungle-either or a wonderful job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Briliant job on the Lira Joe... Loved the imagery. Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    JOe
    Nice job on the club challenge, I love the Lira. Love the nature of the jungle :)
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    The syllable count is fine. I love the word choice and vivid imagery in this piece! Great job on this form!