Wooow... this poem is so beautiful that it swept me away! I looooved every word! I can really relate to the emotions you've expressed in this poem and maybe that's why I feel so attached to it... Wonderful job!
Temps, I absolutely loved the flow and ease of this piece and how it read such a sad expression right into my face. I felt the meaning to be profoundly strong here especially, and your words need not be fancy or impressive but, rang true, as painful as that may be.