Comments : Frost

  • 8 years ago

    by Second to None

    I'll stay perched on Cloud 9,
    Encased in fluffy, falling snow.
    And if there's a way down,
    Please don't ever let me know.

    ^^i really liked this stanza. you used cloud 9 without making it sound cheezey. i also loved the last 2 lines. they just seemed like a perfect way to end a wonderful poem. good jobb(: