Comments : Mortal Arms Embrace

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful write, Brianna...you know my thought on this piece.
    I will nominate it, so many can see how you write so well.

    With love,

    5-5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad poem. Brings all the emotions to the readers heart through your words.

    It's a love that we cannot replace,
    not by anything I can implore,
    I plead, let my mortal arms embrace thee,
    the life that is no more

    How may times we wish to have what is no longer there. This stanza really gripped my heart.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Really wonderful