Comments : Little brother

  • 7 years ago

    by Francine

    It's so sad, but really good. I'm sorry :(

  • 7 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Interesting poem well written and very sad, i guess this is how we grow into the strong confident people we become. I do know i dont wish my past on my kids. Well done. Grant

  • 6 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Well done..very sad and full of emotions

  • 5 years ago

    by Mollie

    Wow man. that was deep.. i felt it. really. i know what its like. well i shouldnt assume. but yeah that was deep.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brix Ambray

    This is sad , dark but powerful.I love the rhyme. WEll written.