Comments : This Is Not Goodbye

  • 7 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Its funny how reading ones work can tell me what kind of a person they are. This was an absolute beautiful contribute to probably an amazing girl..If a guy gave me a poem like that it'd melt my heart! I recommend giving this to her!

    Extremely well written! I usually dont like non-rhyming poetry but I loved this!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Ohhhhhhhhhhh my goodness:)

    This is so touching, so very beautiful. What a lucky girl this Lauren is, to have a guy writing something like this for her..and how deeply you must love this girl to write her something this heart warming.
    I am going to add this poem to my favorites, it is a truly magnificent poem, wish I had a vote left for it.

    When the black knit back-lit curtain is drawn across the sky,
    You will find me,
    Waiting for you.

    ^^
    I am in deep awe of the beauty of these words:)

    Take care, keep writingggggggggggg!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 6 years ago

    by Chellee

    This is absolutely terrific, and has won a spot in my heart :)
    Great job, I feel like there's this hidden message behind it and it's just painted so beautifully.