Its funny how reading ones work can tell me what kind of a person they are. This was an absolute beautiful contribute to probably an amazing girl..If a guy gave me a poem like that it'd melt my heart! I recommend giving this to her!
Extremely well written! I usually dont like non-rhyming poetry but I loved this!
This is so touching, so very beautiful. What a lucky girl this Lauren is, to have a guy writing something like this for her..and how deeply you must love this girl to write her something this heart warming.
I am going to add this poem to my favorites, it is a truly magnificent poem, wish I had a vote left for it.
When the black knit back-lit curtain is drawn across the sky,
You will find me,
Waiting for you.
I am in deep awe of the beauty of these words:)