Comments : One Night

  • 8 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Easy flow and good rhyme scheme. The reader is immersed in the quick passion of the poem and glimpses of intimate imagery are unavoidably aroused. I do not know if the capitalization of words not at the beginning of lines was intentional or not. Also, I would be careful with the word "so." It's often overused, or used as a filler. It can be cliche.

    Nice poem overall - I like anything that flows.