Comments : Mannequin

  • 6 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was great. I liked your title to begin with. That caught my attention. Then how you incorporated the title throughout was great. Everything seems perfect about her. Her life, smiles, everything seems fine. But that is just how a mannequin is. Then you show what is truly eithin the person. All in all a nice write. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Thanks.. :)