Such a herartfelt write.. filled with emotion. You express yourself well & I wish you all the Best dear friend :)
The second verse is my fav. part...

"You played myheart, like it was a game.
You took my pride, and through it down the drain.
You took my love, and shot it down.
What should I do, when I hit the ground?"

Keep penning... :] You have talent :)
Love the rhyme in your poem.
Take care....Olwin.

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Keep penning... Lol, Olwin

Well I would say that when I was reading this, it doesn't sound like a poem at all, it was much more like a letter to your ex lover. I feel the hurt that he has cause you base on what you've expressed. Though I believe that there is still room for improvement. I would recommend that you read more poets work and study their craft and yeah mold it into your own from there.