Comments : The Creature

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Ron, not sure if this is about the female species but sure sounds like it. I don't normally read or comment explicit poems but this one seems to be in the wrong place. (smiles) Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I missed your work my friend. Glad I took a look at this one. It's just as dark and well written as your other pieces. Love the diction as always. Keep up the great work. Nik

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    Lol

    i cant help but laugh! its a poem about PMS! im adding this to my favorites! :D

    (but on a serious not, there is no reason why this should be in the explicit section. no bad words or seductive tones.)