Comments : Addiction;;regret

  • 13 years ago

    by shashini

    Like this one .love the short lines.It keeps your attention.the repitition..makes emphisis.love the ending..that finally it is to the pain that she becomes addicted

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren

    Love this poem because ive seen this in soo many ways, you responded to many of my poems years ago, reading them now they somehow still relate to my life in different ways than they did before. Keep writing, sometimes its our only friend.