Comments : What comes from within the soul

  • 7 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Thank you for writing this. It's the only truth i know. It's all i wish for, to touch another soul with my pain, and make the world cry. grate write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Its amazing how you wrote this, exploring all the degrees of freedom from a baby's giggle,a painter's brush stroke and a poet's poetry amazing thank you for this

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree with the two comments above, but I wish to take them into more detail. Your voice and your soul are very clear, they seem calm and friendly. The poem states that a soul shall unselfishly reach out and touch another soul, well to write this I think it is safe to say mark this off your to do list. The tone of this is uplifting and refreshing among a lot of the pieces people have been writing lately. The word choice is simple yet it is used in such a way that it becomes superb. All of the creativity that you have penned is breath taking. Thank you for writing such an extraordinary piece.

    This only made me smile, so it must be worth a 5/5 and if it's not then please, do tell me, what is?

  • 7 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Whtevr we see,touch,feel is up to d core..
    Like a painting is a whole world for its creator..bt fr us its js an art.
    A baby's giggle is most soothing sound fr a mothr,bt to rest its js a sweet voice.
    We spend time in temples to find creator ,instead of becoming one.
    Bt Its in us ,the truth, the love and hapines and othr positivity.
    And wen find that truth in ur soul ,then u strt to understnd the voice of others..
    Then only u wil be able to cherish a true smile and a pure heart..

  • 7 years ago

    by average thoughts

    And d msg is clear..wel penned this one..i didnt gt time to write much..
    Else u hv no idea i cud write a wal of sentences on dis mastrpiece of uors.