Comments : I Shake

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Wow I can really relate to every word in this poem!
    I love the unique flow of this poem!
    You effectively described every stanza covering it with deep emotion!
    You earned my vote
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    An emotional write penned with sadness and excellent flow. I enjoyed reading this as it brought me to a place deep inside myself.
    Super
    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    The rain clouds are thicker
    And I can barely feel you here
    It makes me feel sicker
    Knowing I only wish you were near

    my favorite stanza :)

    great poem, for sure 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it