I really liked this poem, its very different than anything ive read on here, my favorite part was

A place less of matter and more of mind

i feel like it was a really good start to such a great poem, well done 5/5 ^.^

Awesome write. I really liked the first line "A place less of matter more of mind" Really how I have felt lately, in my mind.. Love how you expressed the emotions of this person as well as telling a story. Nicely done. Thanks for the comment on my poem.

I liked this. It was kind of mysterious and you gave the reader a movie to play in their head. Good imagery and the poem is kind of left to linger at the end