This is a great poem, and really moving. i know exactly how it feels like, watching a loved one die, seeing them in pain and knowing there is nothing u can do to stop it.
stay strong!
good poem xx

I really like it. Very deep, I can feel your emotional pain. I could imagine and I imagined my grandfather. Good job.

Though I can imagine it as well, very well, my sister of all people, it is very good. Heartrending might even be a useful word. Yet it is very good.

Beautiful 5/5

This is really great. I love the title name. I like how you show that he tortures you from the core.
I like your description. Very well written. 5/5