Comments : My Disability

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I can't tell you how every stanza move me miles!
    Your way of expressing your own thoughts is flawless. The rhyming scheme was magnificent and the structured ideas define the title brilliantly.

    I'm so captured with this poem. You brought me tears and a heart-ache. People always do what hurts others, and I know it, myself. They wait and hammer a nail in your wound, and in times of weakness, they busticate your all..

    EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!
    5/5