Comments : Your The..

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    This is a sweet poem!
    I really enjoyed reading it!
    5/5

  • Just a suggestion maybe you should change the end of paragraph two a little so it sounds something like this
    "your the smile to my happy,
    the one that keeps me laughing.
    the one that has my heart,
    and i trust you not to tear it apart"

    Other than that this is a great poem well done :)