This is really good i loved it :) 5/5
My favorite stanza:
Starts off with,
Please don't be angry with me,
I never meant to hurt anybody this way,
I felt alone in this world,
With no body to turn to,
I was grasping on for dear life,
Trying to better myself,
Trying to live for you guys,
When all along I was better off dead.

Wow this is amazing
true emotion and touching <3

Gave me chills it was too real in content. So a great write

Connie

That was awesome i couldnt tell who wroite what u gel'd together so perfectly very good write

Ingenious.

I agree...very good girl collab more often if you can..

Wow, freaking awesome!!

Ur poem has touched mi

Wow, you both wrote this beautifully. It's remarkable.
5/5

I have been so close to writing a letter like this.. it explained my feelings fully :) you are an amazing writer!!

Seems our poems were running the same track. Good collab, smooth and easy.

Amazing poem.
All of your poems are great!, keep on writing!

Also thanks for commenting one of mine.

xx

I really love this poem